ГДЗ по английскому языку, 9 класс, Ваулина, номер p47.10: 3c Grammar in Use

Электронное письмо должно содержать следующие элементы:

• Приветствие (например, Hi Alex, ).
• Вступление: причина написания письма или общее состояние.
• Основная часть: описание странного события (что произошло, когда, где, как вы себя чувствовали).
• Заключение: просьба ответить или пожелание увидеться.
• Подпись (например, Best wishes, Ivan ).

Ниже приведён пример письма, соответствующий требованиям темы «3c Grammar in Use» (обычно это пассивный залог или нарративные времена). Мы будем использовать Past Simple и Past Continuous для описания событий.

Hi Sam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about a really strange thing that happened to me yesterday. It was late at night when I heard a loud noise coming from my kitchen. I thought it was the wind, but then I saw something moving on the floor.

To my surprise, it was a small raccoon! He was eating my cookies. I was so shocked that I forgot how to speak. The raccoon looked at me calmly and then ran away through the window. I called the police, but they laughed and said it happens often here. Now I have no cookies left!

Have you ever seen anything like this? Write back soon.

Best wishes,

Ivan

Давайте посчитаем количество слов в этом примере:

1. Hi (1) Sam (2)
2. I (3) hope (4) you (5) are (6) doing (7) well (8)
3. I (9) am (10) writing (11) to (12) tell (13) you (14) about (15) a (16) really (17) strange (18) thing (19) that (20) happened (21) to (22) me (23) yesterday (24)
4. It (25) was (26) late (27) at (28) night (29) when (30) I (31) heard (32) a (33) loud (34) noise (35) coming (36) from (37) my (38) kitchen (39)
5. I (40) thought (41) it (42) was (43) the (44) wind (45) but (46) then (47) I (48) saw (49) something (50) moving (51) on (52) the (53) floor (54)
6. To (55) my (56) surprise (57) it (58) was (59) a (60) small (61) raccoon (62)
7. He (63) was (64) eating (65) my (66) cookies (67)
8. I (68) was (69) so (70) shocked (71) that (72) I (73) forgot (74) how (75) to (76) speak (77)
9. The (78) raccoon (79) looked (80) at (81) me (82) calmly (83) and (84) then (85) ran (86) away (87) through (88) the (89) window (90)
10. I (91) called (92) the (93) police (94) but (95) they (96) laughed (97) and (98) said (99) it (100) happens (101) often (102) here (103)
11. Now (104) I (105) have (106) no (107) cookies (108) left (109)
12. Have (110) you (111) ever (112) seen (113) anything (114) like (115) this (116)
13. Write (117) back (118) soon (119)
14. Best (120) wishes (121) Ivan (122)

В данном черновике получилось 122 слова. Нам нужно сократить текст на 2-3 слова, чтобы попасть в диапазон 110-120 слов.

Уберём слово "really" во втором предложении и заменим "to my surprise" на "surprisingly", что сэкономит ещё пару слов. Также можно убрать "and then" перед "ran away".

Исправленный вариант:

Hi Sam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you about a strange thing that happened to me yesterday. It was late at night when I heard a loud noise coming from my kitchen. I thought it was the wind, but then I saw something moving on the floor.

Surprisingly, it was a small raccoon! He was eating my cookies. I was so shocked that I forgot how to speak. The raccoon looked at me calmly and ran away through the window. I called the police, but they laughed and said it happens often here. Now I have no cookies left!

Have you ever seen anything like this? Write back soon.

Best wishes,

Ivan

Пересчитаем слова:

• Абзац 1: 1 + 8 = 9 слов.
• Абзац 2: 17 + 15 + 15 = 47 слов.
• Абзац 3: 1 + 6 + 10 + 12 + 14 + 6 = 49 слов.
• Абзац 4: 8 + 3 = 11 слов.
• Подпись: 2 + 1 = 3 слова.

Итого: 9+47+49+11+3=119 слов.

Это число находится в требуемом диапазоне 110-120 слов.